-the blood on the wings could be a little better
-the blending of the wings into the back needs work, seems a tad to smudged/blurred/whatever
-the back could use a little work, the gray part there really throws me off.
That's about it a suppose, good job once again, been a while take care
Reminds me of that epic... what was it called? It was suppose to be a parable on life and it's bad turns.... oh yeah, " Rime of the Ancient Marriner." (got help from friends online to remember that title!) Check it out some time... or is your song based on a darker, prehaps more symbolic version of that epic?